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starry starry night

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Starry, starry night.
Paint your palette blue & grey,
Look out on a summer's day,
Shadows on the hills,
Sketch trees & daffodils,
Catch breeze & winter chills,
In colors on snowy linen land.

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Sunday, November 2, 2008
My 1st draft of 1st chapter (may be somewhere in the middle)/ 9:46 AM

No one can describe how it felt for sure. Some said it's the most wonderful feeling that ever exist in their entire life. Some said it's the main reason they live in this planet. Some said it was uneasy feeling inside of you. Some said it just for the looser. For those who didn't know might ask what is this feeling people keep talking about. Well it's the feeling of love.

Well all Sarah can said right now, it's the most ridicules thing in the world. She was agreeing this kind of feeling was for looser and she was not one of them. Thank God. Sarah was not a kid, she was young woman in her early 20s (or 24 as her mum kept reminding her) who would analyze everything that she did or planned.

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Tuesday, November 13, 2007
Alternative opening/ 12:48 AM

Well currently I can't decide which one I love best as my opening. Hmm... it's hard one. Both have their advantage as the story progress.

"Black Night" is my alternative 1st chapter. The plot has been in my mind only at first I want it as sort of back-story or like a narrator telling the story of the main character.

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Monday, November 12, 2007
1 - Black Night/ 5:49 PM

Black night. It was what people called where the night was moonless and starless. It was the night when evil was lurking in every corner. A chill wind filling up the air made the night much more creepy than normal. Nobody wanted to venture the land in this kind of night.


Deep in the untamed forest, there was a caravan gathered. By the look of them, none wanted to be there. They rather hiding in a cave or continuing their journey, but one of their members, a young mother-to-be was about to give birth and there was no time to wait at all. They had to halt their journey.


A big tent was — big enough to hold eight people comfortably inside, and the only tent — set for the young mother to give birth while others waiting outside, impatiently. A fire was set not far from the tent, but it was not big enough to warm everyone who encircling it. They tried to be discreet as much as possible.


They had been up all night with mix feeling between afraid and anxious. They were afraid if their enemy would take this opportunity to ambush them. They were anxious if this was the one that would stop the long battle to rest. None of them felt glad because the midwife just told them, the young mother might not make it at all. Once in awhile, they heard an eerie sound of kwang-kwit bird creeping in the background (people said its sound was the sign of death).


Kwang kwang! Kwit kwit!


They tried to ignore the feeling and praying the best for the mother.


After hours of waiting, they heard a cry from the camp. They felt relief. The long wait was gone at last. Then the midwife came out, ushered the eldest member, a man to go into the camp.


The man had a look that might suggest him he was from a noble family; a fair-skin, tall, broad-shoulder and proud — although age had finally trying to claim him — with some winkle forming under his eyelids and forehead, and two-pointed scar on his wrist. Few hours ago, he was anxious. A new heir is needed to lead us.


"She lost a lot of blood. She might not make it," whispered the midwife as the man approached her. They walked in quietly, trying not to disturbed anyone else in the came.


The man walked wearily towards the center of the camp where two lanterns were shinning bright to make him able to see clearly what was inside it. There was another woman inside, helping a young mother who was lying on a makeshift bed made from few piles of blanket, to be more comfortable. She gave a nod of respect as she saw the man and quietly walked out of the camp together with the midwife.


The man walked quietly toward the mother.


The young mother looked up at the man as she heard their footstep approaching her — years in battle made her ears sensitive with any kind of sound. She smiled at him. "It's a girl, uncle. I've named her, Seri Kencana, after my grandmother and you're now a grand uncle," she said teasingly at him with a faint smile on her lips.


"Your father and husband would be proud of her." He smiled, while he tried to hide his worried. He looked at his niece carefully; her was very pale and weak but she was happy. He looked at her lovingly, she was like a daughter to him. Truly, he knew his brother and nephew would be proud with this new addition — whatever left — in their family.


The young mother smiled disappeared. "Although she isn't a boy?" She knew their community valued a male heir more to lead them rather than female. She closed her eyes for a moment. Flashes of her father and husband's images came into her mind. They had left her because of this war. She knew even without knowing, she won't survive too.


"Boy or not she still can lead us, if you let her. Just think about your great grandmother, she was a great ruler and warrior," said her uncle, breaking her moment of silence.


"I'll let her alright but I can't watch her when the time comes," she said as she kissed the baby's forehead and both cheeks.


"Don't speak too much, you need your strength now more than ever for her," advised her uncle.


"I know my time is near uncle but I'm worried for her safety. As long she with us, she's not safe," said the young mother as she held tightly to her baby.


He tried to form a strategy in his mind; he was not a Grand Vizier for nothing. He knew the baby wouldn't be safe with any of them right now even if his niece would survive this ordeal because the war still upon them. The only thing he could think of….


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"She need to be sent far away from here, not a minute to late," he explained to his most trusted people just after his niece's burial. There were the midwife, two women, and three men, while the other members of the caravan were already asleep after a long night. As for the baby, she was in deep sleep in the basket in the middle of the camp.


"I'll need you and you," said the old man pointing at the couple standing next to his right. "I need you to be a decoy pretending to bring this baby to the village nearest on the south. If I not mistaken it's two-days travel on foot." The couples that just being pointed, nodded.


"As for you and you," said the old man pointing at the young man and woman sat in front of him, "I need you to bring this baby far away from here, if anything happen just give this baby to the first house you see there. I'll give you further instruction on that." The couples nodded. They knew the risk at stake.


"As for you and you," he pointing to the midwife and a man stood next to her, "I need you here. If people asked, just said the baby died soon after the mother. I think there is enemy inside, all six of you the only people I can really trust in the time of war."


"Sire, what will the others says if they find out four of us missing?" asked the young man on his right. There was a large scar crossing his left cheek, a souvenir he earned in the war two moons ago.

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Sunday, November 11, 2007
Prologue/ 8:08 PM

It was a beautiful night; sky cloudless and full of stars as the moon shone brightly as ever. Surprising no one was out in this kind of night except, a girl who was walking down the hill with her bare feet. She walked quickly without any hesitation, as she knew her direction so well by heart. She just like any ordinary girl; wearing a sarong that covered up to her ankle, a plain blue female shirt and black shawl wrapping her shoulders. For tonight, she let down her hair just to feel the night breeze whispering in her hair.

As she arrived at the foot of the hill, she stopped abruptly to watch her surrounding. It was anything than ordinary. To her north, a serene blue lake with reflection of the bright full moon and the shimmering shinning stars shone brightly on the surface (it was like another sky appear from the water). Across the lake, there were rows and rows of unknown trees (she never saw these trees near her place before). Around and underneath her bare feet, it was a field: stretching beyond her eyes, full of little wild white flowers that just peeking to bloom to their fullness. For her it was the most beautiful place she ever knew, but tonight it was a bit colder than usual. She tightened her black shawl that wrapped her shoulder.

She looked just over her left shoulder, she saw what — who — she was looking for; a silhouette of a man leaning on a big boulder, looking at the bright moon. She knew he always there just like any of their meeting. She walked slowly toward him — even she felt dreaded to leave the beauty of the lake behind her.


"Hi, you're early today," said the girl as she sat down cautiously on the smaller boulder, just opposite the man. He looked at her and answered, "I always early." Although his face was a bit hidden by the shadow of the boulders surrounding them, she knew he was smirking. She glared at him as she turned her head looking at the moon.


"No. You're not. Remember two meetings ago you were really late that I thought you …"

"I had duty to attend. I've told you that," he cut her words. He didn’t like to give further explanation. Once said and done, was always his way.


"Yes. I remember.”


She glared at him before she looked at the lake.


He knew it was time to stop even though he loved to provoke her once in awhile. She just liked little balsam that ready to burst its seeds when people jabbed with their finger.


She sat quietly. It was her way to cool down before she could handle anymore conversation with him. He tried to watch her expression before he could speak again with her. This was one of their many fights. Well nothing physical just verbal but now he knew how to deal with it.


There was a silent as nobody wanted to speak first.


"So how's your day?" asked the man just to break the awkward silent between them.


"We're busy with the harvest. The raining season will be approaching soon…."


Then their conversation took off from one topic to another incoherently. They always talked like the first argument never happen at all. The field now filled with their voice and laughter.


After few hours of talking, she suddenly heard another voice faintly from afar, "Wake up. The sun just rose."

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Saturday, November 10, 2007
Welcome/ 1:38 PM

I don't know how to begin this, but hi to everyone who's reading this. This is my first time writting in NanoWriMo Contest. I got a story forming in my head but the plot currently unorganized yet, so you might find a random plot for awhile.

My sole purpose to enter NaNoWriMo is to know my own limit of imagination. I got a feackle minded so it's a bit hard to transform it into writting because sometime the imagination is hard to capture and forming into a quite readiable story to write and read.

As for the story, the only thing I can say what if what ever you believe is not what it seem anymore and your dreams at night is slowly took over your reality. I still need a title for the story and I can't think any yet. If any people reading this blog, please feel free to comment (flame not welcome because I need something I can work on) and give suggestion to the title.

By the way, each chapter might change as and when I feel like to alter it. So beware, because you've warned. I'll label my story as "story" just for me to differenciate between my own thoughts and my own story.

Enjoy.

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